高考英语概要写作-范文指导.ppt

概要写作 Summary writing,高考新题型,提供一篇350词以内的短文，要求考生基于该短文写出一篇60字左右的内容概要。阅卷时主要考虑以下内容 1对原文要点的理解和呈现情况 2应用语法结构和词汇的准确性 3上下文的连贯性 4对各要点表达的独立性情况,概要写作,What is a good summary,概要写作评分标准第五档（2125points） 1.理解准确，涵盖所有要点 2.准确使用相应的语法结构和词汇 3. 完全使用自己的语言。60-80W 4.有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使概要结构紧凑,contents 内容,language skills 语言,structure 结构,Once upon a time, industrial goods were made to last forever. If you bought a car or a stove, it was a once-in-a-lifetime investment. You paid good money for it, and you took care of it. Nowadays industry has persuaded us that products couldnt last a long time. It is cheaper to throw them away than to repair them. This has led directly to the “throw-away society” which is a great waste of the earths resources. Just think of the cars that are traded daily, just because they are out of style. Think of the expensive packaging material that is thrown away every time a new object is bought. And we shoppers have to pay for that material Our industrial society has turned us into spoiled children. This wastefulness has got us into the great trouble we are in now. When we have no resources left, then we will start to take care of what we have. But why cant we act before this happens Why cant we try to build a society in which the prevention of waste is a virtue （182W）,Step 1 . Understand the whole passage and grasp the key points.,概要写作难点 1,How to get the key points quickly and correctly 如何快速、准确地捕捉要点,抓住主题句或关键信息，忽略次要信息,Para 1,Once upon a time, industrial goods were made to last forever. If you bought a car or a stove, it was a once-in-a-lifetime investment. You paid good money for it, and you took care of it.,,,,,,detailed example,,忽略具体事例,topic sentence,,概要写作难点 2,How to express the key points by using your own words properly 如何灵活诠释，规避抄袭的嫌疑,characteristics,Once upon a time, industrial goods were made to last forever. ___________________,industrial goods were made _____________________.,Some time ago; In the past; Decades ago,to be used for a long time to function well for a long time; durable,近义词替换,You paid good money for it, and you took care of it.,Decades ago, industrial goods were made durable.,spent much money on,treasure,treat it kindly,You spent much money on it and treasure it.,Decades ago, industrial goods were made durable You spent much money on it and treasure it.,Para1.,use it carefully,Nowadays industry has persuaded us that products couldnt last a long time. It is cheaper to throw them away than to repair them. This has led directly to the “throw-away society” which is a great waste of the earths resources. Just think of the cars that are traded daily, just because they are out of style. Think of the expensive packaging material that is thrown away every time a new object is bought. And we shoppers have to pay for that material,,,,,topic sentence,,,,,,,detailed examples,,,,characteristics,result,忽略具体事例,Nowadays industry has persuaded us that products couldnt last a long time. It is cheaper to throw them away than to repair them. This has led directly to the “throw-away society” which is a great waste of the earths resources. Just think of the cars that are traded daily, just because they are out of style. Think of the expensive packaging material that is thrown away every time a new object is bought. And we shoppers have to pay for that material,,,1. Nowadays industry has persuaded us that products couldnt last a long time. 2. It is cheaper to throw them away than to repair them. 3. This has led directly to the “throw-away society” which is a great waste of the earths resources.,,,,Modern Industry,made us believe,convinced,not permanent,Modern industry has convinced us that products are not permanent.,short-lived,近义词替换,2. It is cheaper to throw them away than to repair them. To throw them away is cheaper than to repair them. It is more expensive to repair them than to throw them away.,改变主语（形式主语）,正话反说、反话正说,This has led directly to the “throw-away society” which is a great waste of the earths resources.,,,which has resulted in a great waste of the earths resources.,改变句式,result in,Modern industry has convinced us that products are not permanent. To throw them away is cheaper than to repair them, which has resulted in a great waste of the earths resources.,Para2.,Para 3,提炼相关信息,Our industrial society has turned us into spoiled children. This wastefulness has got us into the great trouble we are in now. When we have no resources left, then we will start to take care of what we have. But why cant we act before this happens Why cant we try to build a society in which the prevention of waste is a virtue,过渡句,,,,,,,,,We need to save resources before its too late,,,This wastefulness has caused us a lot of trouble.,,We are running out of resources and we need to take action.,,,,,,This wastefulness has caused us a lot of trouble. We are running out of resources and we need to take action. We need to save resources before its too late.,Para3.,This wastefulness has caused